left unspoken

[tsilo]

i think your poem is stunning "light of the moon" is so ending's best...

[rose]

we talk in silence
minds mingling bodies
obligations project
tension building
damn the timing
every moment
something new
between the eyes
contradictions few
zero, if honesty
but how can i love thee?
when someone else publicly stands
to be the one holding my hand
and what about you, you too
have her,
then why do these words
dangle in the air,
the rain crashing
as i stand by the window
oblivious of the cleaning and the people
you are on my mind and i assured
that i am there with you,
standing beside you finally
no words need to be said
the rain is falling as always
intensly without reason
i am thinking of you
standing here lost
light of the moon.
~A~


[This message has been edited by rose (edited May 21, 2001).]

[rose]

thank u so much. i was a little nervous putting stuff on here. u have made me smile. thanks.
~A~

[parch]

great poem, haven't been to the board lately but when i come and see a new comer put up somthing like this..i'm happy
nice work
keep posting
please

___---parch

[machinery]

bravo!...one thing: don't be nervous...

that's only in public with where I shine with my nervousness....so none of that on this board...

well, i must say, I throughouly enjoyed this one.. I loved your wording and the mention of rain...and like tsilo said, the last line was a beaut!

continue to post! please...